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0 posted 2001-04-28 04:45 PM



I created him from pure want………………… a need wished real from my soul
Crossing lifetimes…………………to fulfill this ache to make me whole
My muse…………my music…………my reason for rhyme
deja`vu of a lover…………… from another time
A connection felt ……………………………..beyond earth and sky
A powerful strength……………………one can’t deny
A knowledge of knowing………………..remembering once more
Key found…………………….to open heart’s door
So much more…………than mere fantasy
My soulmate………………the other half of me


~SEA~

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-28 04:55 PM


I hope you have found him for real.  This is very nice. Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-28 04:55 PM


It's wonderful to feel that connection with someone, and to actually get to share your life with them is a blessing. You've got a lovely spirit and a beautiful heart, SEA!!!
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3 posted 2001-04-28 04:59 PM


Joyce~ yes, I have   thank you

Serenity~ you are so sweet....hugs to you   thank you it is pretty wonderful    

~SEA

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4 posted 2001-04-28 05:14 PM


Each new day ... is blessed with butterflies ...
when you can see your own reflection ... in his eyes.

this is lovely and sweet Sea-girlie ..
"he" inspires beautiful poetry in you  

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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5 posted 2001-04-28 05:16 PM


Janet~ thank you....I haven't shown it to him yet....he's not big on poetry...lol I get that "ummm,that's nice"   but that's ok...that's why I bring it here to share   thanks    SEA
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-04-28 05:18 PM


SEA...you kep stretching...and it looks good...
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7 posted 2001-04-28 05:21 PM


Sunshine~ thank you for always saying such nice things to me   You are so wonderful!! Thank you    SEA
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8 posted 2001-04-28 05:50 PM


SEA,

He is there.  Keep looking and believe.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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9 posted 2001-04-28 06:05 PM


SEA~
Girl ... this is LOVELY !
I just adore your little muse !
And you can give that muse a BIG HUG from me ! >
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-04-28 08:36 PM


*sigh*. . .

I'm jealous. . .  

wonderuful SEA. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2001-04-28 09:30 PM


beautiful. You have the special touch that reaches out to all. M.
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12 posted 2001-04-29 02:34 AM


lol im bumpin but o well i just now be readin all of urs!!!
sea u amaze me!
tiff

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"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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13 posted 2001-04-29 11:05 AM


Sure and why shouldn't we create a hunk of a muse!  Mine is Mel Gibson, by the way, and let me tell you it works!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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14 posted 2001-04-29 11:06 AM


Wonderful and so full of depth SEA ... this is a splendid tribute to your soul mate, very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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15 posted 2001-04-29 11:26 AM


Excellent work, SEA!  I thought this was very original and creative, especially the pauses, they were very well placed.  It also added a different flow to the piece, pausing during the pauses, what an interesting work this truly was!     
I just may come into Open #13 more often if I continue to see this quality of work.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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16 posted 2001-04-29 01:06 PM


This is beautiful, SEA.  I hope you show it to him soon.


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17 posted 2001-05-09 12:27 PM


Gotta love a muse like this...lovely
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18 posted 2001-05-10 02:48 PM


Ah, the OTHER half of you.  Must be the one they call Sandy

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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