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Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

0 posted 2001-04-28 11:49 AM

I really miss you when you're not around.
And, it's not just that I don't get to hear your voice,
or see your face,
or touch your skin.
For the wind whispers your voice to me.
The sun shines with the brightness of your eyes.
And the rain touches me with your fingers of warmth.

But still,
I need to have you here with me.
Telling me that you love me,
Hearing your heart beat faster when I'm around,
Touching the softness of your face.
Feeling you next to me when I go to sleep at night,
And curling up next to you on those cold Spring mornings.

That's what I want,
And I know that we can make this dream real.
Just taking one step at a time,
Together,
We can have it.

But still,
I miss you
When you're not around.

But I know that you're there,
Holding me,
and
Loving me.
Just like
I love you.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

1 posted 2001-04-28 11:52 AM

I loved this... how I wish...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-04-28 12:00 PM

I like this. It holds hope, and hope is one of the best things we can have.

Here's to making dreams reality, eh? also..to making dreams reality, but never loosing sight of that sensational dreamlike feeling. The last is hardest of all sometimes. See? Made me think..Thank you, and I loved it!

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

3 posted 2001-04-28 12:12 PM

I like this, for i travel a lot myself.
To the library with this.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-04-28 12:59 PM

PassionsVoice~
Just lovely, Diana !

Of course, I like this thought ~
'the wind whispers your voice to me'

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-04-28 08:46 PM

Very good!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-04-28 08:48 PM

this is wonderful Diana. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2001-04-28 11:05 PM

Passions Voice - written very smooth and just flows together. Absolutely lovely, lucky guy.

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-04-29 12:15 PM

Wonderful expression...James

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

9 posted 2001-04-29 12:17 PM

This sounds like a lovely beginning to a true love story. Nice poem.

Passions Voice
Member

since 2000-10-23

Posts 291
Michigan

10 posted 2001-04-29 02:33 PM

latin passion, thank you.  And I wish it too.

Temptress, thank you, and I'm glad that I made you think.  Hope helps, but I'd rather hold on to something more solid.

Bernie, thanks, and thank you for putting me in your library.

Marge, thank you. I like that line too.

Sunshine, thank you.

Sven, thank you so much!

Bill, thank you. Yes, he is, and I'm lucky too.

James, thank you.

Joyce, I hope that it's a beginning that will never end. Thank you.

passion is life. . . ~Diana

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