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Wanting you
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Wanting you |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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Heart Beating loud Inside my cell How I long for you I want to feel All the things I hold in me Dreams that speak to me To feel your arms Holding me tight Your Breath on my skin Your soul letting me in To see into your eyes Feel you loving me My dreams must come true Please let me be the one Who gets to hold your heart Let me love you , hold you Be close enough to kiss you To share warmth as one To complete me |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
Such an ardent discourse, I thoroughly enjoyed the energy and inspiration. Coal |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
This is excellent. I could feel the desire and the passion. Wonderful. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is a great write, with good flow. Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Be close enough to kiss you." As Bob Dylan said "Honey I want you...so bad"...James |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"All the things I hold in me Dreams that speak to me" I liked this entire poem, you have let go with such passion. But these lines especially. "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can feel the electricity in this one. . . well written. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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