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helen smith
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since 2001-03-12
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0 posted 2001-04-28 01:36 AM



Rough hewn castles ,
standing still
keeping yet all harm at bay.
Sorrow's fortress,
however strong,
succombes upon
the break of day.

© Copyright 2001 helen smith - All Rights Reserved
Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
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1 posted 2001-04-28 02:07 AM


'Tis brief but fair. The words penned.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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2 posted 2001-04-28 02:15 AM


Nice words.  Joyce
latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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3 posted 2001-04-28 02:17 AM


I too am waiting for morn. Very poetic.
thecraig
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4 posted 2001-04-28 07:43 PM


Dusky moss glistening with the sunlight. A fair picture you paint Helen.
wandering glider
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aloft
5 posted 2001-04-29 12:42 PM


Would that the sunrise be so cleansing...

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Waseem Cheema
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Pakistan
6 posted 2001-05-20 07:09 AM


Excellent job....(it is after u told me)
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