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JLR
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0 posted 2001-04-27 11:38 PM


Cyberland of Oz


A connection made
caused a smile
from lips that haven’t
smiled in a while

and I never meant to seem ungrateful

This technology frustrates me
though convenience be it’s cause
misunderstanding is so easy here
in the cyberland of Oz

but the instant gratification is well worth it

Lighter now
we both could use a little levity
I’ll be your silent night
your vacation from reality

it would be my pleasure to talk silently as you sleep



© Copyright 2001 JLR - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-27 11:43 PM


clicking ruby reds and calling Toto....I so enjoyed!
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2 posted 2001-04-27 11:49 PM


Excellent!!!

even in Oz there are wicked witches  

doreen peri
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3 posted 2001-04-27 11:54 PM


don't talk to anybody in cyberspace... that's what i do...  

nice job on this

i wrote about that movie, too... lol

oh WAIT!!! was it YOU i was talking to the other night??? how many screen names do you have??? ain't life in the box fun?

now... follow me... i'll take you down this little yellow path..... *grin

seriously, though... you write well... but i told you that before.... and i'm sure i'll say it again....

(i'm clicking my heels now)

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4 posted 2001-04-28 01:29 AM


You made me smile, bless your heart!  How true this is, and Oz it is!

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latin passion
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5 posted 2001-04-28 01:54 AM


I feel like I've been in oz all day, thanks for a great poem.
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6 posted 2001-04-28 06:35 PM


clicking my heels 3 times before i.......helen

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


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7 posted 2001-04-28 08:41 PM


JLR~
Nicely done walk down that CyberBrickRoad.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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walker
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8 posted 2001-04-28 09:20 PM


JLR- This is so clever and well done!
If I could only have a heart, a brain, courage or just go back to Kansas. Actually I don't know what I want from this Cyberland Oz

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