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Whispering Sounds Of The Sea
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Whispering Sounds Of The Sea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Together we walk hand in hand down at the ocean listening to the sounds of the sea. It whispers the sounds of a roaring tide as we walk along side by side. Gentle waves roll in and touch our bare feet, the bright sun sky fills us with glowing heat. Night soon returns with the whispering sounds that were born of the sea, creating a song for us to dance and there is no place that I'd rather be. Locked in your arms and wrapped in your love as we listen to the whispering sounds the sea. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gentle Spirit, The scent, sounds and touch of the sea always inspire me to write. Thanks for a visit to the water's edge. Enjoyed it much.  Michael Proust- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You're so right. The sea can be such a lulling sound. And with love too? Oh my. Joyce |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
The sea hold my attention like none other. Thanks for bringing back memories. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
GS, you've just described one of my favorite places. . .  wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Night soon returns with the whispering sounds that were born of the sea, creating a song for us to dance and there is no place that I'd rather be. Locked in your arms and wrapped in your love as we listen to the whispering sounds the sea. ======================= another gem from your pen of serene... very lovely images and emotions GS your write with a soft spoken gift. well done poetess. There are two lasting bequests |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~~D~~ this is beautiful, I love the Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Such a soothingly lovely piece. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Michael, I find such great inspiration in the sea.....just listening to it. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Joyce, the sea and love......what a combination. *s* Thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Juliane, thinking of the sea brings back many memories. I wrote this sitting on the beach around midnight. It was awesome inspiration. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, it is one of my favorite places also. It seems I will never be able to visit quite often enough, but yet it draws me there in my mind.....and I remember. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Aw Janet, now your making me blush....but sincere thanks go to you for your encouragement. Bless you. D On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady Lauren, I know that you have often spoke of your love for the sea. I think it offers us both....all....a place of serenity. Thanks for always encouraging, and for reading. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, thank you dear heart for always taking the time to read. Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Gentle Spirit, the sea offers such tranquility. Beautiful writing. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sigh Eyes, indeed it does. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Such a vision. Such starry night walking hand in hand along the beach. Such devotion to love.. Hear Hear. Your words are so soothing. LP |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LP, thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vandana, that makes me smile....thank you for the gift. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love the sea water on my toes...even at the latitude at which I am able to experience it...generally very frigid! The spookiness of the sand being swept from under my feet by the tide is tittilating, too. Enjoyed the visit with you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vas, thank you for going along. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ahh, the ocean...my weakness! You've penned this excellently, GS! Love it! sp  to be with you... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, your walk along the seashore sure differs from mine (Come On Home). This was very well done...beautifully done. Enjoyed. jwesley |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The only time in my life I walked along an ocean shore I walked alone, and I walk alone now in a way, sometimes it's hard but you have to do it...just keep walking. Kathleen Blake |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sp, the ocean just holds this draw that says.....come back. I love it there. Thanks. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Jwesley, thank you so much. I appreciate it. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes, we do keep walking Rose......and sometimes we do it alone. Thank you. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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