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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2001-04-27 04:14 PM

She is like water
That I am floating in
Floating helpless upon her
As the water comes seeping in

Her water warm to the touch
Clean and pure
Her water heals so much
Providing me a cure
From the mortal disease
For when I am wet,
It’s as if my heart seized
And I not born just yet

While her currents may take me
To many a different shore,
Her love’s an endless sea,
Her beauty’s as deep as the seas are
She brings life to those that live
And touches all who sail upon her
Something beyond life she gives
For that I am indebted to her

She is like water
That I am drowning in
But I am allowing her
To slowly take me in

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-04-27 04:16 PM

This is very warm indeed...enjoyed...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-27 05:18 PM

....shhh....I'm pretending this is for me.....shhh......

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-04-27 05:46 PM

This one I really like. You know I wrote something regarding a similar theme. But have not posted yet.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

4 posted 2001-04-27 05:51 PM

Lady, thank you.

Walker, I'd like to see yours.

SEA, shhhhh...I won't tell, if you won't. *S*

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-04-27 05:54 PM

ohhhh

shhhh

thanks PK..... you are so fun!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-04-27 06:01 PM

Her water warm to the touch
Clean and pure
Her water heals so much
Providing me a cure
From the mortal disease
For when I am wet,
It’s as if my heart seized
And I not born just yet

While her currents may take me
To many a different shore,
=================
Something beyond life she gives
For that I am indebted to her
================

LOL@ Sea....arent we all... arent we all

(even the ones he wrote 10 years ago)

and this beauty is like floating on a sailboat , being rocked to sleep by the waves and the warm sun on ones skin...
lovely poetic comparisons and imagery PK.

PortuguesePoet
Junior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 34

7 posted 2001-04-27 06:43 PM

While her currents may take me
To many a different shore,
Nice line this one....

I liked this poem..Makes me think of my wife...I'm in portugal shes in south africa....hope she gets here soon. Thanks for The Beautiful poem.

Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

8 posted 2001-04-27 07:08 PM

The ending to this is stunning! Perfect!

Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

9 posted 2001-04-27 07:37 PM

This reminds me of the essence of a mother's womb.

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