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Open Poetry #13

Untouched

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-27 02:17 PM

I'll hold my breath until the end,
when I will see you in your true ways.
No sense in passing this opprtunity,
I will endure because I need to know.
I might get dizzy.
I might get heart pains.
But my love is here at stake.
Risking it all,
for you to show me if your love for me,
remains untouched.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-27 02:18 PM

Wow. Good luck my friend.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2001-04-27 02:24 PM

i love the way you worded the ending, if your love for me remains untouched...that was great.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-04-29 03:59 PM

Sometimes you've wondered long enough and just have to know. *S* This is great... good luck!

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