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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-04-27 12:21 PM

breeze you are known
trees whisper your name gently
linger on the scent.

whisper not your name gently
boldly seek the scent
known now is mystery

a scent wafts on air
body memory calls me
mysterious no longer.

Graphics:"Picnic In Autumn" by Debra Barrett
Music: Vanessa, Mysan.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-27 12:33 PM

Hmmmmmmmmmm. I like! Yes, I like VERY much. Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-27 02:02 PM

Mabe, I loved this, and the only thing missing in the picture was you and me on that bench, but we will be one day soon. This was so gentle, and lovely.

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-27 09:59 PM

ooohhh....shivers.....

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-27 10:47 PM

Thank you so much for enjoying the Choka.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-04-28 12:55 PM

Julian~
Perfectly lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

6 posted 2001-04-28 02:31 AM

your poem pervades the corners of my mind....I use only Red Door..could I be the one ?

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-04-28 09:30 AM

this picture made me feel as if I were truly there......and the entire poem brought me peace...thank you

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-04-28 10:53 AM

excellent Julian. . . I love the way that the words took me there. . .

well done. . .

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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

9 posted 2001-04-28 11:19 AM

Marge: thank you so much for reading.

Helen: I'm "A Little Sexy" (believe it or not this is truly a parfum) woman myself, but Red Door sounds intriguing, I must shop for that here.

Irish Rose and Sven: I am so glad you joined me on that park bench.

Thanks to all. ~Shalom

"I am not now that which I have been."

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