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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-27 10:55 AM


I can't forget the night
you sat,
spoke to your friends
about us.
Told them how happy
you are,
you smiled at me with love
in your eyes.
You looked at them,
you said,
"I'm Lucky"
"She's Lucky"
"We're both Lucky"

My heart swelled
with pride.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-27 11:02 AM


How lovely and rare.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-27 12:29 PM


And well it should.  Yes, you are both lucky.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2001-04-27 01:20 PM


I love it when men tell their friends how much in love they are, making them realize joy they've been blessed with.  Thanks for this.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2001-04-27 07:40 PM


Joyce, he is definately one of a kind.  *s*  Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-04-27 07:41 PM


Interloper, yes indeed we are.  when two people feel the same, I don't know if it's luck, or just love, but I'm glad it happened to me!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-04-27 07:42 PM


Michael, it was good to here him tell his friends.  It felt like he was sharing his heart.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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7 posted 2001-04-28 04:04 PM


Yes, GS, that is when you KNOW they're in love...they share it with all of their friends...what a great thing!!  

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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8 posted 2001-04-28 06:14 PM


Which I'm sure he was.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-04-28 07:25 PM


Snowpants, I most certainly felt like we both were, but hearing him tell his friends was very nice.  And he likes to pick on me cuz he knows I write these things for him and then post them......He says I'm telling the entire world.....lol.  That's ok, I would gladly tell the world.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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10 posted 2001-04-28 07:26 PM


As I also am sure Michael.....it seems he finds some way to say I love you every day without having to say the words.  Now that my friend ......is love.  Thanks and hugs.  
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2001-04-28 10:56 PM


Gentle Spirit - you are, most gentle...And I wish you the best. A fabulous writing.

BC

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12 posted 2001-04-29 02:29 AM


Wonderful tribute to the both of you.  How luckly you both are to have one another. LP
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13 posted 2001-04-29 10:35 AM


Bill, I do thank you for such lovely comments and wishes.  Hugs to you and take care.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-04-29 10:36 AM


LP I do indeed feel blessed.   Thank you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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15 posted 2001-05-03 09:51 PM


That's the way it should be.  Fantastic.  
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