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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-04-26 09:52 PM


As we said our goodbyes
Neither wanting to let go
So much was my love
Continuing to grow
Just one more kiss before we'd part
Would help to still my beating heart

Do you feel my warm kiss?
Do you like what you feel?
Does your mind, just like mine
Not allow such feelings to be real?

Always after being together
I have trouble letting go
There's so much that I have to say
So much I want you to know

Never is there enough hours
To spend here with you
To have you with me for 24 hours
Still would never do

How easily do I surrender
To your tenderness and your charms
How safe do I feel when I'm close to you
Surrounded by your loving arms

Is it wrong for me to love you?
With you is where I want to be
So much warmth do you radiate
Right into the heart and soul of me

One minute of the day from you
Is something I cannot miss
How easily I could lose myself in you
With just one lingering kiss

When I close my eyes at night to sleep
There's a piece of you in my heart I keep
Whenever I feel pain
When my thoughts are unclear
I reach inside my heart
And take comfort that you're near

An angel in disguise
It comes as no surprise
That you're from heaven above
As you surround me with your love
Nothing else I wish to see
Than you here beside me
Where our spirits will be set free

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2001-04-26 09:58 PM


Very beautiful write.

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Jesse Jaymz
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2 posted 2001-04-27 01:23 AM


totaly beautiful.  *hugs*  i love this.  feel free to e-mail or icq me.  i would love to chat about this poem.     i loved it
love ya
jesse

All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground.

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3 posted 2001-04-29 03:51 PM


Beautiful! I especially like the next to last verse. *S*
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4 posted 2001-04-29 03:57 PM


Hang in there.  This one is a keeper. Joyce
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