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Sven
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0 posted 2001-04-29 01:55 PM


joyful
life
renewed

journeying
long
river

just
like
rain

jaded
lovers
reunite

joining

learning

revealing

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-29 02:02 PM


wonderful...and inspiritional.
Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-04-29 10:31 PM


I liked this one a lot, Sven!  What does JLR stand for anyways?  Thanks for giving us a few possibilities!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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3 posted 2001-04-29 10:34 PM


Is jlr...joyful life renewed?

Nice work.

Tiersdin
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4 posted 2001-04-29 11:02 PM


Excellent write, Sven, loved this!

~Tier

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5 posted 2001-04-29 11:45 PM


lol @ responses.  I thank you for this, Sven, even though you're the only one who seems to know who I am.  I am honored.  Where are my fans when we need them.  Ha!  Thank you!  By the way, you were close on some, maybe someday I'll reveal what it does stand for.
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6 posted 2001-04-30 12:05 PM


uh hmmm...Fan reporting!  Let me see here JLR could be: just like reading, jolly little rancher, well the possibilities are endless you see, so we will just say - glad to see you in Sven's gallary and nice job Sven.

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

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7 posted 2001-04-30 08:54 AM


yes, I do indeed enjoy the

just
like
rain

part...always renewing, refreshing, giving life...

yes, I like that very much.

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8 posted 2001-04-30 08:56 AM


I too have been curious, but perhaps you have it here, Sven Pen?   Love this..another beautiful painting. I love your soft and simple strokes.  
Sven
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9 posted 2001-04-30 01:02 PM


lp, thank you!

Allan, I have no idea. . . but the possibilities are endless. . . thank you. . .  

A_m, it could be. . . you never know. . . thanks. . .

Tier, thank you my friend. . .

Mysteria, thank you. . . I like jolly little rancher. . .LOL  

Sunshine, I like that part too. . . I think that's a big part of this. . . thank you my friend. . .

Temptress, thank you. . . perhaps I do have it here. . . only JLR knows for sure. . .  

JLR, I don't think that I'm the only one that knows who you are. . . after all, we see you here everyday in your words. . . and I'm quite positive that you have more fans than you know. . . and you might want to hold off on the revealing. . . makes it more fun for us to guess!!     Thank you my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 2001-04-30 09:15 PM


Is that about Jeremy? Isn't that his initials?? Oh well... hehe
nice poem

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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11 posted 2001-05-01 03:07 PM


A wonderful writing of an extremely talented writer!   One of my favorites, most positively.     
Corinne
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12 posted 2001-05-01 03:33 PM


Sven,

You are a giving poet,
of beauty.

Corinne

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13 posted 2001-05-01 03:35 PM


John,

This is a great poem!  :-)  And a great tribute.

Laura

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14 posted 2001-05-01 03:52 PM


Sven- Another great tribute to a great writer, lovely!
Sven
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15 posted 2001-05-01 07:18 PM


Jenn, if you know something that we don't. . .    thanks. . .

Just a Woman, thank you. . . one of my favorites as well. . .  

Corinne,   thank you my friend. . .

Laura, I knew that you'd like this one. . . thank you. . .  

walker, thank you. . . there will be more. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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16 posted 2001-05-01 08:12 PM


*bump*page one

i thought this poem was very interesting..
definitly an awesome write..i liked this as i liked all the series of "passions gallery" poetry so far by you..
thanks for sharing sven..
until the next one...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

JLR
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17 posted 2001-05-01 09:47 PM


Nope, not Jeremy, though I do like the name!
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