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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-26 05:03 PM


  

please come dance with me
you will not burn by my touch
we can fan the flames

polishing buckles
friction causes heat to rise
we have combustion

     

it’s spontaneous
enveloping both of us
SEA won’t put it out.

and neither will I
nope, I will not douse this fire
interplay is nice.


Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-26-2001).]

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-04-26 05:24 PM


Aren't you wonderful.....
Balladeer
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2 posted 2001-04-26 05:41 PM


it appears things are heating up..
latin passion
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3 posted 2001-04-26 10:01 PM


s-combustion...how I wish it were me. Sigh. Latin Passion


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4 posted 2001-04-26 10:07 PM


InterLoper~
WONDERFUL !
Such fun !
~*Marge*~

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nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-04-26 11:48 PM


yes...very spontaneous... and nice as always *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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6 posted 2001-04-26 11:56 PM


I felt the heat way up here, and I was smiling for ya too!  
Rock on, this was great!

Please visit me at my new homepage:
http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents/cfm/451673

Interloper
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7 posted 2001-04-27 12:17 PM


SEA ~ Yes, I am  

Balladeer ~ Can you find the A/C switch?

Latin Passion ~ I believe your first comment on my work.  Thank you for the heart meling sigh ...

Marge ~ Glad you enjoyed  

Wynter ~ You are sweet, 1derful, and kind as usual

Mysteria ~ Wow.  Thank you for adding to the heat.  Gotta find that darn A/C switch ... Whew!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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8 posted 2001-05-14 04:57 PM


Can it get a little warmer in here...
latin passion
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9 posted 2001-05-14 05:24 PM


A wise WIZARD told me not to rush in, but sage and clarey and one in one million ways. Playing with fire, one can get burned. Can't resist your poem as I once said before. LP

For those who believed in me -May  God keep you. There is no fear in love..For perfect love casth out all fear.

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10 posted 2001-05-14 06:25 PM


I can feel it from here. . .

great job Interloper. . .

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