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Passion Clouded
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Passion Clouded |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Passion Clouded Caught up, knocked from my feet seduced by the emotion of beauty, untainted infatuation, too naïve to predict an ending I went along for the ride Another story showing in my mind, no more than that entertaining myself with harmless fantasy, until my hand was called, my bluff met your hand lay in mine I let go of reason Passion, madness…can feel quite the same when the cloud cover is thick with satisfaction, bodies, hearts acting without thought mostly without consequence I would love you forever Full circle of innocence, no one meant a moments harm blinders secured, no need to fear every good intention ours still the motion is towards darkness I try to settle again for function But finding no rest, alone, in a dually made drama stepping back, my distance now safe thinking again I regret ever taking the risk I will never be the same [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 04-26-2001).] |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
lovely poem of heart felt words. I enjoyed it very much. going in my library =) Thank you. *JOE* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JLR~ What an emotional out-letting ... 'Passion, madness…can feel quite the same when the cloud cover is thick with satisfaction' 'I will never be the same' Deeply touching ... Muchly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
JLR- This is another beautiful piece of your heart here. Lovely! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
never regret. . . but don't miss the lesson. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I agree with Sven on this one. Excellent piece. Laura |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful work, emotionally written and enjoyed greatly. Well done ! Regards, Olias |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nobody ever is. Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
light the match, one get burned, but do we really regret? What we learned from mistakes done past...is what we have to ask. Loved it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"my bluff met your hand lay in mine I let go of reason Passion, madness…can feel quite the same when the cloud cover is thick with satisfaction, bodies, hearts acting without thought mostly without consequence"....you couldn't have said it better...*s huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Beautiful write. I never regret a thing, as that makes for a frown, however if it teaches me a lesson I smile. I thought this was great! Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
"I let go of reason" Why not? Nicely done. I felt it. \\ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this poem takes my breath away !!! helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hummm, passionate madness.... enjoyed! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... this a a powerful and emotional write JLR! To delve into passion and come back from the clouds with the questions you have ... very well written and thought-provoking!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Heartfelt words straith from your heart. excellent piece.. Charisma |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Oh you did chisel the words from Olympian stone to bring this to all which applies to all A very fine job my compliments "The most redeeming facet of life is that we have the comfort of knowing it will end. Death doth love equally." |
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