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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
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0 posted 2001-04-26 04:25 PM



this are my words for my first born
as a beautyfull rose u was born
in the love of ur moms u relly
cause she might tell u i left u
as she is the one who took off
cause she dont want me to see u
or feel ur tender body
i wonder if u got my trates
off my face but u a girl
so my smile i wish u get
dont let empty words atract u
to a man
my stile i hope u dont get instead
i hope u like ur mom
not a girl adicted to sex
just a simple girl with ambitions of knowledge
and love for the rest
and the nests ur moms give u
is all u need
I feel crazy and hopeless
been with out u is a great nightmare
i dream every night
but i always fight this thoughts
cause u still from my blood
but ur mom might think its the best
to keep u away .....but dont worry
when i die ill gide ur way
so stay in touch with god
as fo me that was my mistake
i thought he was fake in the past
but now i beg him to forgive me at last
and give me strength to live
till i see u
and feel u
u'll always be my baby
u'll always be a pice of me
and for that im happy
a pice of me walkin
talking
and making better days for ur moms
she'll was my firslt in everything
love, pain, sex,happiness ...and now
she is made me go o lonely without u
i'll see u in the heavens baby
or b4 that when ur moms decide

LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE  JUAN PABLO

© Copyright 2001 juan pablo rodriguez - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-26 04:32 PM


We all wish the best for our daughters.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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2 posted 2001-04-29 03:40 PM


You've expressed a lot of regrets for your mistakes and a lot of love for your child. I hope you can find peace. *S* Welcome to Passions!
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