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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-04-26 03:32 PM



The past sings out
causing me recall
relocating emotions
remaking me fall

Ready with remember
wanting me to see
you are still here
still a part of me

Around every corner
of my memory
I keep finding you
waiting there for me

Reminders tucked in my heart
of how it used to be
knowing I will never
really be free


~SEA~

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-26 03:33 PM


momemtos of you
upon which I trip and fall
constant reminders

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-04-26 03:37 PM


Ready with remember
wanting me to see
you are still here
still a part of me
=====================

freedom is overrated  

and you know I love this poetic reflection..
beautifully and sincerely expressed

only we ... can set ourselves free ...

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

PoeticKnight
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3 posted 2001-04-26 04:03 PM


Beautiful and sad SEA.

Ready with remember
wanting me to see
you are still here
still a part of me

You are always a part of us too...


snowpants
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4 posted 2001-04-26 06:58 PM


Nope, some things we'll just never be free of...but everything is for a reason...at least, that's the way I see it...great write, SEA!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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5 posted 2001-04-29 03:42 PM


Sad and beautiful... and oh, so true! *S* But yanno... in a world where relationships are so often treated as disposable, it's kinda comforting to know that some people will always be held in our memories... it means they really, really mattered! *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 04-29-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-04-29 03:47 PM


Oh, that last line, I wonder if that is true!  

I feel free today, think it'll last...it'd better....I have a future to live

be free...SEA

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7 posted 2001-04-29 04:08 PM


SEA~
Special memories are always meant to be ...
I would never want to be set free of them.
They contain some of the most beautiful moments of my life.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2001-04-29 04:11 PM


May your tomorrows make a mockery of your yesterdays.  Joyce
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9 posted 2005-06-12 10:30 AM


Wow...just thought I would take a stroll through archives and found this beautiful piece!  I was just thinking this myself today.  Love this, SEA!  ~  Becka
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