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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-26 12:10 PM



Reflections of love
souls mirroring each other
show love's victory

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2001-04-26 01:17 PM


this is beautiful  
Waseem Cheema
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2 posted 2001-04-26 01:46 PM


Excellent
Interloper
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3 posted 2001-04-26 03:03 PM


SEA ~ It pales next to the beauty of SEA.  Thanx  

Waseem ~ Thank you faithful friend.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-04-27 12:19 PM


Reflections of love
souls mirroring each other
show love's victory


Two in submission
No war to be fought and won
Victory in love..


or  Victory of love..not sure which  *s

~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-27-2001).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-04-27 10:26 AM


Yes, I knew a couple like that....

very nice!

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6 posted 2001-04-27 10:28 AM


A masterpiece for sure! Bravo! well done!

*smiles*

-Tier

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7 posted 2001-04-27 10:31 AM


What a lovely thought, 'souls mirroring each other'

beautiful piece on 'love'

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8 posted 2001-04-27 12:03 PM


Wynter ~ Thank you for the fine, poetic response.  Either way (of/in) there is Victory  

Sunshine ~ Thank you for the read.

Tier ~ You are TOO kind.  Hardly a masterpiece ... but I am pleased you like it

VAS ~ Thank you for your kind response.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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9 posted 2001-04-27 01:21 PM


Very well said.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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10 posted 2001-04-27 01:23 PM


Michael ~ Thank you my friend.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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11 posted 2001-04-27 01:38 PM


its beautiful you write wonderfully

ben redshaw the great and deeply in love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

walker
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12 posted 2001-04-27 02:24 PM


To see soul to soul, surely has to be love's victory. Well done!
OLIAS
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13 posted 2001-04-27 03:16 PM


The yin and the yang
United, harmonious
You pen perfection

and I enjoyed it very much thank you.

Regards
Olias.

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Deep in the heart
14 posted 2001-04-27 03:38 PM


Ben ~ Thank you very much.  i believe this is your first comment on my work.  Thanx for the read.

Walker ~ Thank you for the read and the kind comment.

Oliad ~ No, it is I who thank you for the read and kind comment.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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15 posted 2001-04-27 10:08 PM


always     so nice interloper..
A victory won.
Captured in this looking glass
For all to behold.

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