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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-26 12:08 PM


They can see
Without really seeing
They can exist
Without really being
What would they do
If confronted by you?
Something only time could measure
No gold nor jewels in this treasure

And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts

Inside my mind

A place to go
Without ever leaving
A faith somehow
Without even believing
My body wrecked and shattered
But none of this matters
There’s a garden where I go
In which the seeds of life grow

And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts

Inside my mind

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-26 12:16 PM


In your temple ... well done.

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2001-04-26 12:23 PM


Something only time could measure
No gold nor jewels in this treasure
=====================
A faith somehow
Without even believing
My body wrecked and shattered
But none of this matters
There’s a garden where I go
In which the seeds of life grow

And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts

Inside my mind
======================
cant think of any place Id rather visit *S*

"A faith somehow
Without even believing"

what a very cool line that is...
this whole poem is very cool ...

mind over matter ...
when one knows how to be in touch with themselves like this...
the possibilites are endless...
from self healing to finding inner peace
Self sanctuary....
way cool.

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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with you
3 posted 2001-04-26 01:21 PM


"And when I’m alone
Inside my mind,
Nothing transpires, nothing hurts"

It's where we can be free....I relate.....

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