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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-04-26 11:15 AM




O moment’s surcease
reflections of one’s love felt
now, comes victory



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1 posted 2001-04-26 11:58 AM


victory - over time -  over space = makes sense to me -
beautiful Senryu

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2 posted 2001-04-26 12:10 PM


Reflections of love
souls mirroring each other
show love's victory

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2001-04-26 12:12 PM


lifes simple pleasures
found in little victories
a heart's new treasure  

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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4 posted 2001-04-27 01:25 PM


You folks are the best!  Thank you!
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