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Open Poetry #13

Perfect Victim

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-25 11:48 PM

what a victim
you are
and what a horrible person
i am.
you only ever speak
of my faults
and flaws
always forgetting
to mention
that you are so
obviously
absolutely perfect.
how stupid of me
to think that you
may be slightly
less than perfect
or that you may be
human.
because you never once
treated me any less
than wonderful right?
and that makes you
perfect.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

1 posted 2001-04-25 11:54 PM

I have learned from this way of thinking. There often is no right, no wrong, simply two points of view. It is so hard when people are unsuccessful in their ability to communicate. And you portray that sense of betrayal from feeling judged so very well.

I feel it in my bones and it is chilling.

A.M.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

2 posted 2001-04-26 12:27 PM

Ouch! And where does this 'attitude' come from? Someone teaches it.

Krawdad
/:-}==
=#===

juanrodriguez
Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 66
ontario canada

3 posted 2001-04-26 12:39 PM

hope u liked my poem........damn thas a goood poem u wrote ......its about ur man right ....he is damn lucky

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-04-26 01:35 AM

Lots of sarcasm here. I'd want to know who it was addressed to, before I could comment. Joyce

Sami
Junior Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-04-26 09:33 AM

thanks for reading this first of all..and i want to apologize for the cruetly in it, but it is about an ex that said in an argument after breaking up that everything bad that happened was my fault and such...so i told him that he must be such a victim then... hence the poem

sorry though if yous did not like my 'attitude'...
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

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