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Open Poetry #13

Across the Lake

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-25 10:47 PM

Across the Lake

And so I saw you in my mind,
as sun lay low it's glide on me
across the lake, as time would take
and whisper kissed, left prints of thee.

I wandered into thoughts of you.
Surrounded mine, in bedded want
of holds, embraced, of kisses laced
each memory a shadow's haunt.

I saw you in my depth of sleep,
reached out to rest my lips to yours.
Upon the touch, that thrilled so much
forever dreamt I, on your shores.

I'd drown myself in moments of
your kiss to kiss, from edge to edge.
The promise held, in sighs expelled
released in me, a love in pledge.

I held that glide without, within
as heart beats, two to one for you.
The sun's warmth shines it's realign,
'til next we meet, come morning new.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-04-25 10:51 PM

Oh my. This is lovely. Joyce

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-04-25 11:00 PM

This is lovely, Wynter...

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-04-25 11:03 PM

pretty pretty

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-04-25 11:04 PM

Maureen, this is gorgeous verse, I love the flow.....velvet soft.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

5 posted 2001-04-26 08:01 PM

Where is this lake? Seems to have a control over you that sure is powerful. Hot dreams!!

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