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Graduating Pleasure
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Graduating Pleasure |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Here I am in make believe world watching new history quickly unfurl; making as much sense as I can wandering through with no definite plan; pain & displeasure as far as possible kept to real those feelings so under the carpet they are swept, Past predicaments not mentioned in real time company where day to day social attitudes find their place & win me Win me from the dream of pulling a self together; another mind entwined in a mutual gathering of outlined futuristic paths paved in formal Treasures. Rich bundles of worry are the measure weighed in to surmount all graduating pleasure. |
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La Matadora New Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 3 |
I love your language, very descriptive, very vivid. I got a bit lost on the path as I read, but what's a good poem if you can't read it three or four times and get a different perspective every time? Keep writing! "Our time is like a dance of death whose uncanny rhythm is understood by few. Everyone whirls confusedly without seeing the abyss." - Countess Balles |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
I loved this one too craig..it is exciting times we live in with a treasure at the end of it all.yes keep all those painful thoughts under the carpet ;you really are a cheerful chappie |
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