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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-25 08:07 PM


there is the question
I always ask my self
do I love her for real
is this feeling I feel real
when would I be able
to KISS her tender lips?
or to embrace her delicate body
when would I feel her breath close to mine?
is she the one I lost in the past?
is she who I came back for?
was she the reason I stoped my resting time?
but all this cant seem to see no answer
my heart screams for her
waail my arms craves for her arms
my hands craves for her soft sweet skin
I havent touched her hair
but still I know its the softest part of her
it seems I've done it all the time
to play with her hair as she sleeps
I haven't kissed her
so I feel her breath clearly close to mine
is she the one I lost in the past?
is she the one I came back for?
I wish I was a bird
to fly after her every step
and guard her from every harm
I wish I was a gost
to watch over her in her sleep
and let her know she aint never will see pain
but once again I awake and see my arms empty
but her sweet smell tells me to dream again
knowing she will be in the dream
I wish I was a god to bring her to me
and make her my goddess
so i wonder do I deserve her?
is she really the one I lost in past times?
will I ever feel her again?
will I ever hold her again?
will I ever find the pice of me she took
when I died
or search for ever till my soul dies
off sadness and depresion
to love u baby is my intention
not having u is my deseption
is she the one I lost in the past ?
is she the one I searched for ?
is she the one I came back for ?
will i ever find u?
or already did but u are too far
i love u


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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
1 posted 2001-04-25 08:34 PM


I hope you get some answers to your questions Juan.  Joyce
Sami
Junior Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-04-25 11:40 PM


Juan, im crying and i dont know what to tell you...that was an amazing poem..msg me ok??
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

Amuse_mi
Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110

3 posted 2001-04-25 11:45 PM


To be sought and cherished and held in such regard is the wish of womankind.  You tantalize the woman's soul with this piece.  Bravo!

A.M.

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