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0 posted 2001-04-25 06:44 PM


The clock seizes to function,
Leaving me without a guide,
I decide to seek-
Some other means,

My mind turn primordial,
Without my guide by my side,
Dark from light,
Now is hard to tell apart.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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1 posted 2001-04-25 07:07 PM


Wonderfully written and yet so simple. Beautiful.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

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2 posted 2001-04-26 12:44 PM


You hit the mark. It is basically a man who has no watch.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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