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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-04-25 06:15 PM


Let It Be

I'm waiting for our relationship
to be redefined.
To see if she held any genuine desires
in her heart to sustain
a relationship that wants to remain.
Does a friendship have a chance to survive?
How many feelings are still alive.
Don't want to rush the feelings.
I'm just waiting patiently.
Will she call to let me know
or will she just let it be.
Gosh I hope she calls.
Spending time without my friend
is no fun at all.

Jameslee@April25,2001


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JLR
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1 posted 2001-04-25 06:25 PM


I hope she calls you, too...nice, thoughtful write!
Sven
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2 posted 2001-04-25 09:38 PM


she'll call. . . I know it. . .

wonderful. . .  

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Bill Charles
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3 posted 2001-04-25 09:44 PM


JamesMichael - a touching writing, tender with wants, don't let it be, but slowly tread, as she will whisper sweet words, to thee.....

BC

Paula Finn
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4 posted 2001-04-26 11:49 AM


Waiting is the pits huh babe? HUGS it will happen

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2001-04-26 05:05 PM


Ah, yes....there is that section of time that I refer to as 'in limbo'....not knowing if they will call, or how they feel, or what's going to happen now. Yes....waiting, still waiting....
Great writing, my friend!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


vandana
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6 posted 2001-04-26 05:23 PM


she'll call you one day,my friend enjoyed
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-04-26 06:29 PM


Actually she did call...she told me we'll go see a movie together...from her description on my answering machine I believe she wants to see "The Mummy...have to call her back a little later...James
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