My Lips Wanted More (a sensual one)

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Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

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By the sea

0 posted 2001-04-25 05:41 PM

My Lips Wanted More

by Michael

We kissed
and how my lips so wanted
more.

Her warmth begged
as our bodies cried
in hunger
to be fed.

With fingers,
I combed her flowing
auburn hair.

I pulled her close
and could feel
each rise
and fall of breast,
each supple curve
within my hands.

I kissed her eyes
and then the tip
of her small nose.

I sought  her lips
and
greedily tasted them,
our breaths hot
in anticipation.

She softly sighed
as I reached
for the lamp and turned
the room to darkness.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-25 05:50 PM

And then ... and then?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-25 05:52 PM

Makes me want to call my girlfriend...James

Sami
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since 2001-04-08

Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-25 06:20 PM

breathtaking!!!!! i wanna know what happens next!!! lol
~Sami~

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2001-04-25 08:34 PM

Michael--yup, you're right...this is a sensual one...it is full of sighs.

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-25 08:36 PM

Lovely love poem. Joyce

Coco
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since 2001-01-28

Posts 48

6 posted 2001-04-25 08:44 PM

Michael, your poem is beautiful and I can't seem to get rid of the smile I have upon reading the response our friend Interloper has said...

Exquisite writing from your everflowing pen...

Hugs2uPoetFriend
~coco~

Blaec
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 130
The Sunshine State

7 posted 2001-04-25 08:48 PM

This makes my wish that my husband were home!!!

elizabeth anne
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since 2001-03-29

Posts 83

8 posted 2001-04-25 09:24 PM

Michael,

This is so lovely, dear. Hugs to you, my friend.

Elizabeth Anne

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-04-25 10:43 PM

Very sweet Michael, leaving the reader to anticipate what happens next.....I loved it.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-04-26 05:36 PM

Interloper,
(smiling)  I'd better not say...  maybe I will in a sequel.  Thanks.

James,
I'm sure she's appreciate the call and the attention. Thank you.

Sami,
Thanks for the "breathtaking" and for reading.

Martie,
Okay, it's your turn to write one like this.  Thanks, my freind

Joyce,
I'm glad you liked this.  Thank you

Coco,
Thanks for the "exquisite" and for reading.  Ask Interloper what comes next.  :-)

Blaec,
I'm sure your husband is wishing the same.  Thank you

Elizabeth Anne,
Thank you, my friend.  Hugs to you also.

Sue,
I'm happy you had the chance to read this.  I know your time is valuable and you don't often make it to Passions.  Thank  you, my friend

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-04-27 12:14 PM

We kissed
and how my lips so wanted
more.

pefection in writing and in anticipating and....and..and my lips always want more..so much more..

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

12 posted 2001-04-27 12:41 PM

Michael!!!

This is so beautifully erotic, an awesome write, I love it

Take care,
Melissa~

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

13 posted 2001-04-27 01:14 AM

i loved this. and i know how this feels. for i have been here before. she even had auburn hair which i love to this day. beautiful peice.

Jesse

All I feel is hurt and sorrow, praying it'll all be gone by tomorrow but as tomorrow rolls around, another tear hits the ground.

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

14 posted 2001-04-27 12:36 PM

Wynter,
And so do my own.

Thank you

Melissa,
Thanks for the "awesome" and for "loving" this.

Mostly, however, just thank you for taking the time to read this.

Jesse,
Yes, isn't it such a lovely color? Thank you.

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

15 posted 2001-04-28 05:35 AM

Michael is this my challenge? If it is I'm worried!
Loved it, love you.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

16 posted 2001-04-28 07:45 AM

Sigh

Irish Rose
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17 posted 2001-04-28 09:24 AM

boy, reading is something I'll never give up...wow!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

18 posted 2001-04-28 01:55 PM

I was hanging on the edge of my seat.....and fell off!!!! LOL WHEW!!! good grief......I can't breathe

This is going into my library...hope the others don't burn up

did I say I loved this?!?!

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