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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-04-25 04:32 PM


Unjustified


Your questions and touches are unjustified
You have no right to do what you do to me
You have ruined my life that is plain to see
I wish you would just go away and let me be
I don't wish anything bad against you but you need help
Watching me bathe and asking me questions about my sexuality isn't what "I'd like to be alone right now" means
You are sick and demented, you think that just because she's gone, I can just flip a switch and not be "that way" as you like to put it
Let me tell you something, just because she's gone doesn't mean there isn't someone else.
You think my feelings are just a game that you can toss around and play with whenever you like
I hope that someday someone will treat you the way that you treat me
Maybe then you will see


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-04-25 05:26 PM


Your anger seems more than justified.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
2 posted 2001-04-25 07:02 PM


What an interestingly terrifying piece. This person is sick and dimented.

"I am not alive enough to kill myself." - Mary Ipal

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-04-25 07:06 PM


This broke my heart.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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4 posted 2001-04-25 09:34 PM


Laura, this is very powerful. . . well written. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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