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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-25 11:17 AM



Words

just a few words
to say how you feel

do i have to pull and tug
it is like ......i steal

when i need you
to reveal

you turn aside
another conceal

no other words here
are ideal

i shall make
one last appeal

words from you
will kill or heal


"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2001-04-25 11:19 AM


Nice write
I have the words
Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 04-25-2001).]

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2001-04-25 11:20 AM


A powerful piece...a very nice write!

Nathan

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-04-26 09:32 AM


oh boy, they sure can...

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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