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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-04-25 10:10 AM




Tough as a nail, with hearts as big as a whale
A
rtists always on call, loyal, dependable to all
U
ndivided in trust, they show wisdom are just
R
eliant and true blue  but  self  indulgent   too
U
nequivocally  has power to  live for the  hour
S
tubborn in sorrow  this  bull  named   El Toro

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



© Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
2dalimit
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1 posted 2001-04-25 10:25 AM


Bravo! Poetically clever.
Melton

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2001-04-25 10:38 AM


Very witty, Kethry...a fantastic write!

Nathan

Doug Pretorius
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3 posted 2001-04-25 10:50 AM


Woohoo! I totally agree with the other comments, very clever and well written!
Kethry
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4 posted 2001-04-26 05:57 AM


Thanks, It's part of a series I'm working on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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5 posted 2001-04-26 10:32 AM


Excellent description, Kethry... it makes me remember and very much miss an old friend who was all those things. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2001-04-26 10:37 AM


Kethry,
Interesting and well done.

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-04-26 11:51 AM


Hey you... nice to see your name here again girlie  
and glad to see your continuing your acrostic series
way cool....
and psssst.....
(congrats on breaking 4000!!)

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-04-26 12:52 PM


How clever ... is that a double acrostic?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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9 posted 2001-04-26 02:58 PM


Kethry~
Such a brilliant little piece !
Wonderful !

Congrats on the 4000 milestone, hon.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-04-26 03:26 PM


Yes, congratulations on 4000 and you are subtle aren't you!!

Welcome back, Kethry!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


serenity blaze
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11 posted 2001-04-26 03:44 PM


Keth? HOW DID YOU DO THIS??????
Please Help! I've done a triple acrostic and could never get it to line up!!!  

Very Clever, you! Congrats on 4,000!

coyote
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12 posted 2001-04-26 10:28 PM


Exemplary piece of the acrostic style, Kethry. Thanks.
Btw, I'm not just "full of bull" for no reason.  

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

Kethry
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13 posted 2001-04-27 04:39 AM


Thanks everyone.
I can't tell you how much I've appreciated the ongoing support  and encouragement over the last nine months.
Lynne

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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