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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-04-25 05:45 AM


I am in a lonely place.
I am standing here alone.
I finally recognize my face
unspaced...this is my twilight zone.

I never wanted spotlight glare.
I didn't want to dig for bones.
I did not wish to meet my stare
in mirror of the twilight zone.

Don't cry for me, I hate the pity.
No sigh released in steam of city
every pressure ever known
becomes surreal in twilight zone.

Feel the rage as I kick doors...
feel the mage of love wants more....
on the stage to beg for score,
twilight...what I'm living for.

(love ya, baby, can I have some more....????)

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-04-25 06:57 AM


Why aren't you on ICQ dammit lol...you posted this an hour ago - missed ye again I did...

hugs...

interesting poem from you K - different in style..you know having a range of writing styles shows a person's development as a writer...

K

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-04-25 08:51 AM


Kamalas right....growing and glowing.....
and youre not alone baby....
but I KNOW... I KNOW ....
feels that way when the ONE is not there...
*sigh* ... I KNOW...
hugs me twin....
me

Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-04-25 08:57 AM


serenity, you said this just the way I feel when I'm missing my guy too....out there in the twilight zone........*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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