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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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A Giveaway That color doesn’t look good on you, shade of putrescence with a certain luminescence, glowing in darkness but with no shine of its own. I’m reminded of a kid’s toy, the kind given away - bright and new but quickly forgotten because it doesn’t do anything. © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 04-25-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
happy meal to you hehe good write yuh |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm not sure if this is something someone said to you? probably jealous. Joyce |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Excellent done. good read |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne, Elegant, but sad. Stuffed bears, lions, and tigers do little but yield to hugs, but the inability to part with them suggests a transcendent value to children and adults alike. Bob |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
You DO like to make me think - don't you  I will be reading replies now - this should be fun |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
some people find it easy just to give things away. . . but, there's always more value in keeping those things. . . wonderful Corinne. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yep, Walt, that's what I was thinkin' of! Joyce - hmmm, maybe! Thanks! Wasseem, thank you! Bob, I think your reply was a lot deeper than my poem! Bill - evil grin goin' on here! Thanks, Sven! Corinne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This made me think of all the smiles I've given away and hopefully, they meant something. Thank you, Corinne. Kathleen Blake |
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