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I Breathe You
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I Breathe You |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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I Breathe You I breathe you as I breathe life, filling my soul with the passion of living, deeply, joyously tasting each breathe, holding it, holding it...savoring the warmth, lingering, lingering...long as I can, exhaling, just to breathe you again, as I breathe life, shrouding my heart in the folds of the moment, holding on, holding on, until I breathe you again. w. james beard, jr. © March 2000 |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i'd take a deep breath but it stinky in here. the dog tooted. really awesome feelings and words yuh |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Know all about those stinking, tooty dogs, Walt...thanks. jwesley |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I have called the EMT guys, CPR enroute. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
How wonderful to be someopne's very breath. Joyce |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Never stop breathing it, James. All writing comes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Breathe it deeply, and enjoy it James. Well done. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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aurora rain Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 90 |
the most impact in the shortest piece of writing. only talent can achieve that. mesmerised. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ I like the very idea of someone breathing me in - and then - 'deeply, joyously tasting each breathe, holding it, holding it...savoring the warmth' *Deep Sighs here* Breathtaking write.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
jwesley, I like the whole feel of this poem... it is very well written  TaraB |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The breath of love...well done! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem jwesley...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... well done! *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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