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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-04-24 07:35 PM


I used to think that dreamers
Were the strongest of the strong
I used to cast my judgment
On the ones I felt were wrong
I used to think this world
To be so far below my dreams
But now I know this world
Is never really what it seems
I used to watch the others
Lose themselves to daily grind
I used to think that someday
I would leave them all behind
I used to think me different
Than the others in this place
I used to think me different
But I’m just another face


[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 04-24-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Mabel A. Dilley
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1 posted 2001-04-24 07:42 PM


melodic and insightful write. Keep on penning.

"I am not now that which I have been."

PortuguesePoet
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since 2001-04-24
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2 posted 2001-04-24 07:45 PM


I agree, were all sides of the same coin....good work.
jwesley
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3 posted 2001-04-24 07:48 PM


Well written, my friend.

jwesley

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-04-24 10:21 PM


Very profound writing, Kevin.  Well done.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-04-24 11:22 PM


Hello there, Cutie~

And a handsome face you are too !
Just great to see you.
Enjoyed your thoughts, as usual.

We are all different - and yet so much the same.
*Hugs*
Come back more often, Kevin.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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