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Open Poetry #13

If Only I Make You Smile

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-04-24 05:52 PM

If only I should make you believe,
The truth In this love for you,
If you could feel that
It Is true,
From the depths of my heart,

If I only could make you believe,
That my heart can show to you,
make you realise
That love is only what you see

If only I would make you believe,
that love might show to you,
how much It takes to
Heal the pain
Just as summer
coulds brings rain,

To wash away,
and make new,
If only I might make you believe
That love Is the thing you care for,
If I only make you believe......

In this love I have for you, and more

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-24 06:54 PM

how romantic, makes me want to write another love poem!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-24 07:02 PM

To smile and find happiness...such an important and desirable part of love...James

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-24 07:18 PM

This piece just makes one feel romantic, well done!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2001-04-24 08:18 PM

G....R....I....N!!!!!

If he won't, I will!!

jwesley

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-04-24 09:28 PM

VanDana~
You make us smile with admiration for your soft, soft phrases.

If I only make you believe......

In this love I have for you, and more

Ahhhh ... and more
Now I'll bet that will make him smile !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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