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Sami
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 49
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-04-24 05:26 PM


what an incredible feeling
it was to hold you
again.
and to think
at night while i lay
trying to sleep,
it was just beginning
to not feel so lonely
and so cold.
but just having
those comforting arms
around me,
even just for those
mere few minutes,
was enough
to send my mind
spiralling into a chaotic whirlwind
of memories.
i could feel
so deep inside me,
beneath the smile
and the laughs,
that my soul
was crying.

'Sometimes we think it's holding on that makes us strong, but sometimes it's letting go' ~~Sam Ewing

© Copyright 2001 Samantha Masales - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-24 05:39 PM


I hope the holding continues.  Lovely poem.  Joyce
juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada
2 posted 2001-04-24 06:23 PM


that man is lucky /..........u feel so in love with him?      

[This message has been edited by juanrodriguez (edited 04-24-2001).]

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2001-04-24 07:10 PM


so romantic  
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