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Open Poetry #13

No Flight - Senryu

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-04-24 05:03 PM

incarcerated
cage gilt design, soft wings clipped
enslaved by envy

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 04-24-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-24 05:08 PM

Whoa, gal. Your wings will never be clipped because one cannot clip the wings of a bird in flight. And you, dear lady, are flying higher and farther each day.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-04-24 11:59 PM

LadyInWhite~
This is extremely well done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BrightStar
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 219

3 posted 2001-04-25 11:27 AM

Beautiful. Lovely.

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

4 posted 2001-04-25 12:54 PM

It is hard - nay impossible - to imagine you feeling envy -

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