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0 posted 2001-04-24 02:48 PM


Illusions’ Dreams

Once there came this bright illusion
albeit a fallacy to my heart,
I fell for its deep deception
the delusions tore me apart.

Wonderment came with the chimera
and strong belief in the fantasy;
Awake would I from the hallucination,
away with the delusion from me.

This damn poor bit of humbuggery
this hocus pocus of the heart
ne’ermore the falseness for me,
from this mirage I shall depart.

That figment of imagination,
that trick of love’s daydreams
the errors seen in the machinations
are only that, a dream.

©KRJ
18 September, 1999


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-24 02:55 PM


Darn those anyway!  My first read this morning, and it was sure a good one!

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Waseem Cheema
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2 posted 2001-04-24 03:35 PM


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3 posted 2001-04-25 11:11 AM


Once there came this bright illusion
albeit a fallacy to my heart,
I fell for its deep deception
the delusions tore me apart.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dream a little dream
let mind fix upon the good
and dream peacefully

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-04-25 01:16 PM


It is clear that even back in '99 - you were writing with the same great quality you pen now
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