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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Devastation Destruction Ruin, All I ever seem to bring, And misery follows Wherever I go It might be better If I was alone And spared everyone From my mind All I ever wanted Was something And now I have Nothing And that’s all I deserve, My ruination (Just a little something light and fun for today...j/k) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If that's light, I don't want to see your "heavy." Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brush this away, and paint me some light!  |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Interloper..thanks *L*. Sunshine...Coming right up. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Sadly to me this sounds like such a pronouncement and futility of self. It just my read on it, but this poem sounded so sad, so final in its conclusion. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
That little dismal cloud over your head, will pass. Joyce |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Don't spare us from that clever mind of yours.......  SEA |
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