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Open Poetry #13

A couple in mind

PeterPeter
Junior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 30
British, London

0 posted 2001-04-24 08:48 AM

What could I see?….. if only I could
What should I see?….. if only I could
Would I want to see?
So much badness
and not much good

I’d want to see you….I know I would
For you, are my all
In this dark frightening wood
Oh yes, I want to see
After all?
Something I alone have
Is so caring, so good

[This message has been edited by PeterPeter (edited 04-24-2001).]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2001-04-25 12:02 PM

i am sorry it took so long for you to receive comments...

i smiled when i reached the end...the simple style in which this piece was written just tugged at my heartstrings harder...

ahhh...to be contented with life

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-04-26 11:03 AM

Write on!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

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