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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-04-24 05:15 AM




To be in love...
is to feel a million butterflies,
playing tag,
somewhere,
deep inside...
While you enjoy the tickle!


To be in love...
is to feel,
a longing,
a never-ending need,
to touch the one you hold,
in your thoughts...


To be in love...
is to listen to your heart whisper their name,
on waking,
all through the day, into the night...
only to unite with their heart,
in your dreams...


To be in love...
is to realize the futility
of trying not to love...
You know that it can’t be done...
you have already fallen,
and that can’t be undone...


To be in love...
is to see a sky full of rainbows,
without the rain...
To hear a bird’s song, and hum the melody...
To lie in the grass, and float,
amongst the clouds...


To be in love...
is a gift,
to two hearts,
with the same need...
To be...
loved...


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-04-24 05:27 AM


This is wonderfully expressed. You managed to say everything that I could not define that's been naggin me awake this morning. Thank you.
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2001-04-24 06:50 AM


~~~ Serenity ~~~
Thank you!!!  I'm glad that this one gave you good thoughts, and I really am glad to see you here today!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Ariana
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3 posted 2001-04-24 07:29 AM


Sunny

To be in love is to feel like you are flying and floating in the air with your feet never touching the ground.  You are right - To be in love is wonderful.  Beautifully penned my friend.

walker
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4 posted 2001-04-24 07:45 AM


Loving is great! Lovely poem.
vandana
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5 posted 2001-04-24 10:29 AM


enjoy
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6 posted 2001-04-24 10:46 AM


To be in love...
is a gift,
to two hearts,
with the same need...
To be...
loved..."


this is so perfect, and just what I needed on such a dreary day here....an added extra smile, thank you sunny one.... i love this...


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



Sunnyone
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7 posted 2001-04-24 11:41 AM


Hi Ariana...
Yes...some of us have such a need to be in love, to feel that weightless, giddy feeling and to know that he/she does too!! Thank you my friend!!!!

Hi Walker...
Thank you, and I'm glad that you came by to share it with me!!

Hi Vandana...
So good to see you, my friend, and I thank you for joining me today!!!!

Hi Greeneyes...
If I can bring you a smile on a dreary day, then I feel all the better for it!!  I'm glad you enjoyed this one...it was fun to write and share!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-04-24 06:09 PM


Enjoyed your feelings about love...James
Coco
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9 posted 2001-04-28 02:33 AM


To be in love...
is to listen to your heart whisper their name,
on waking,
all through the day, into the night...
only to unite with their heart,
in your dreams...


Sunnyone, hugs2Ux2 this poem just brings out the smiles from nowhere and what I quote from your poem above just kept me sighing...

I enjoyed reading your poem a whole bunch sweetie...




Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-04-28 09:10 AM


I felt this in 1973.....it's still alive!!!!
Sunnyone
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11 posted 2001-04-28 09:32 AM


~~~ James ~~~
Thank you, and I am glad I could share with good friends such as yourself!!

~~~ Coco ~~~
Yes.....love is meant to make you smile, and I'm so happy that this did for you!!!

~~~ Irish Rose ~~~
Oh, yes....yours is of the lasting kind and so rare to hold these days!  I am so happy for you!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


DYME
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12 posted 2001-04-28 10:53 AM


SIMPLE AND BEAUTIFUL.

NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17

Sunnyone
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13 posted 2001-04-28 01:27 PM


Thank you Dyme...
sometimes simplicity speaks volumes!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


Auguste
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14 posted 2001-04-28 06:16 PM


"to listen to your heart whisper their name""

How very true this is, my friend.  So pretty is this  poem.  You've captured "love" so well.  


Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Sunnyone
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15 posted 2001-04-28 10:20 PM


Oh, thank you, Michael...
I can only capture what I feel....and love always feels so nice!!!!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!
  
    


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