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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sleep If I became, for you, as sleep, Would you protest My eyes, my breath, the rhythm of my heart To own? Or would you trust That love Must Calm? RMW |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ahhhh...I really liked this! |
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NIAI Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 52 |
I could only TRUST as would you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
oooh I like this, especially that closing phrase! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"...that love, must calm..." Well done, Sir! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahhh, a meditative breath whispered on waves of REM. Beautiful. Thank you. Cor |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
To own? . . . Must Calm? Curious, but frankly, the contrast escapes me. Krawdad |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I got hooked on the "love must calm" I truly believe it to be the anchor of life. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Bob! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
I love it when your poetry makes me think. And it does that often. *tee hee* 
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