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Light Sails Blue Ocean.
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Light Sails Blue Ocean. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Light Sails Blue Ocean. Why? The sun scorching I feel each ray penetrating Winds taking over weakened sails I sit alone amidst all my ills What? Of tomorrow returning I know not that today exists Wings I wished would persist Flying me, soaring high above The sails of my life, is an instant A moment, a minute second constant I had dreams unfulfilled Many loves untouched I know not who I can trust However much I adjust In a simple gust of wind I have a gilmpse of hope The sails, so light lost in the vastness Of an ocean so blue, sailing along I remember your sweetness How I wish you were near So I could hold you close Telling you from the depths of my heart How much you mean to me. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Daniel, this might as well been written from my own heart... |
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aurora rain Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 90 |
it's beautiful. so light. much like a song. beautiful melody. i don't write such formally-structured poetry. sometimes i wish i could. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kathleen, Thank you so much. Apologies, for not viewing or writing. I will keep returning. Aurora Rain, Thank you. Of course, you can do likewise. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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