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I Felt Your Eyes
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I Felt Your Eyes |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
You tell me you never felt anything for me. Am I wrong to doubt your sincerity? I felt your eyes. The tough guy exterior you portray to view, I felt myself gravitating to you. I felt your eyes. I felt tenderness and kindness I've never known. Through your eyes, I never felt alone. I felt your eyes. Your eyes spoke words, perhaps others never heard. Did you know I held on to your every word? I felt your eyes. For the part of you you couldn't let anyone see. In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability. I felt your eyes. Your eyes on memories path, they heed me. Right or wrong, vow to follow where they lead me. And I'm still feeling your eyes. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
And I hope you rad those eyes right. Joyce |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your eyes spoke words, perhaps others never heard. Did you know I held on to your every word? I felt your eyes. For the part of you you couldn't let anyone see. In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability. I felt your eyes. Your eyes on memories path, they heed me. Right or wrong, vow to follow where they lead me. And I'm still feeling your eyes. ======================== the eyes say so much... and I love the rhyme scheme here and the repetion line... very cool poem Gem "In your eyes, exposed a vulnerability." ahhh.. that gets me every time  I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
JJ-Thank you, I appreciate. JM-"Hi" and thanks for your thoughts. Vandana-Thank you. |
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