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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-23 08:15 PM



Did you ever have that kind of day
when nothing seemed to go your way?
Two steps forward, three steps back,
can't move ahead  keep loosing track.
Try to find a moment of peace
  one problem after another
  never to cease.
  One of those days
  when so much goes through your head,
  just want to go home and get to bed.
  I think I'll go home and grab me a brew
and forget all the little things
  I've yet to do.


  Kick back and relax
calm down and unwind,
and  when tommorrow gets here
I hope that I'll find
that not every day will be like this,
but hopefully bring sweet joy and bliss.
I hope your day wasn't just like mine too
but if it was hang on
and I'll pass you a brew.
And at the end of these words
I just wanted to say
Goodnight to all,
I hope you had a great day!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-23 09:29 PM


Yes we all have days like this.  But you've found a way to lick it. Write about it and forget it. Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-25 03:47 PM


I can relate! *S* Great poem... and I hope your days are better! *S*
Mabel A. Dilley
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3 posted 2001-04-26 04:03 PM


Actually, my day was exactly as you have described. When relaxing and reviewing the day, I found some humor therein and dwelled on that. The brew; however, sounded quite refreshing.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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4 posted 2001-04-26 04:06 PM


Thank you, and you have a blessed day, too

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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5 posted 2001-04-26 05:02 PM


I have days like this, as has everyone.  Even so, we push on, as we must.  A very good write, this one.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

JLR
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6 posted 2001-04-26 05:09 PM


Yep, a months worth.  Good expression!
snowpants
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7 posted 2001-04-26 06:29 PM


Oh yeah...I work for lawyers!  Make mine a double!!   hehe...very cute write, GS!!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-04-26 06:34 PM


More than I'll admit too...James
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-04-26 08:48 PM


Fortunately today was not one of those days....ahhh a day off, plenty of sunshine, and lots of fresh air.  Who could ask for more?  Thanks to all of you for responding, and may all your days be good ones!!  Hugs.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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