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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-04-23 08:02 PM



I lay  in the darkness last night
and I listened to you breathe,
I felt a steady beating heart
of the man in whom I believe.

I laid there in the silence
closing my eyes I could see,
the love there in your eyes
the certain way you look at me.

Before drifting off to dream
I gently gave a kiss or two
I softly whispered in your ear
good night dear,  I love you.

And somewhere in the darkness
the silence heard us breathe,
and two hearts beat as one~
in this love they do believe.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-23 09:27 PM


This is very sweet.  A comforting love.  Joyce
Tessa
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2 posted 2001-04-23 09:45 PM


There is such a comfort in love when it is good.  You've written that well.  
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3 posted 2001-04-23 09:53 PM


Very sweet...  
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-04-23 10:57 PM


It's wonderful to feel this way.....this is lovely.

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-24-2001).]

Wilfred Yeats
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5 posted 2001-04-24 01:08 PM


i dream to have such kisses again

Gemini
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6 posted 2001-04-24 02:37 PM


Gentle Spirit-This was a very tender and touching piece from your heart, nicely done.
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7 posted 2001-04-24 02:51 PM


A comfortable goodnight that we can all believe it.

Kraw'

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8 posted 2001-04-24 03:01 PM


very comforting Joyce, thanks  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-04-24 03:02 PM


I write as I feel Tessa, thank you.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2001-04-24 03:02 PM


Thanks for leaving your thoughts Sea.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2001-04-24 03:03 PM


It truly is wonderful is it not Rose!! Thanks hon.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-04-24 03:04 PM


Bill, heres a wish
from me to you,
may all of your dreams
always come true............

Hugs dear poet friend.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-04-24 03:05 PM


Thank you for sharing such heartfelt words Gemini......*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2001-04-24 03:06 PM


Krawdad, it is indeed a very comfortable place to be.......thanks alot.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

jwesley
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15 posted 2001-04-24 09:06 PM


wonderful words my friend...nice feeling, huh.


jwesley

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16 posted 2001-04-24 09:09 PM


Beautifully romantic, GS.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Gentle Spirit
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17 posted 2001-04-24 09:17 PM


Love is always a nice feeling JW.  It's also a nice feeling to have friends read, thank you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2001-04-24 09:18 PM


Ah Lone Wolf, it is the romance that makes this love so special.  Thank you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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19 posted 2001-04-24 09:26 PM


This is gently romantic.  Such a pretty read. Thank you, Gentle Spirit.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2001-04-24 09:29 PM


Well Michael, I guess I am just a romantic at heart.....thank you for stopping and leaving such thoughtful words.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 04-24-2001).]

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21 posted 2001-04-24 09:36 PM


You knew I would like this one    *w*  It shows your heart.  *s*  

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (edited 04-24-2001).]

Gentle Spirit
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22 posted 2001-04-24 09:47 PM


Hey you.....thanks.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Suetang
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23 posted 2001-04-24 10:10 PM


This was so very beautiful and obviously written by a loving soul....Thank you....Sue.

Suetang

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24 posted 2001-04-24 10:13 PM


The loving soul comes from the love that is given to me ten fold Sue.  My writing is easiest when I can write what I feel in my heart.......thanks.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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25 posted 2001-04-25 11:43 AM


Very breathtaking and gentle.  I am enjoying reading here.  *s*
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26 posted 2001-04-25 12:09 PM


Thank you and I hope you enjoy it here.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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27 posted 2001-04-25 01:48 PM


I believe, too.  Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Gentle Spirit
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28 posted 2001-04-25 02:32 PM


So glad that you believe.  Thanks.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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29 posted 2001-04-25 06:49 PM


Beautiful and romantic write, GS...definitely fits my mood lately, too!  Love it!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Gentle Spirit
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30 posted 2001-04-25 09:56 PM


I am glad that you have the mood of love Snowpants, I can't think of a better mood to be in!!  Thanks so much for stopping by.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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31 posted 2001-04-26 10:52 AM


This is beautiful, GS! *S*
Gentle Spirit
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32 posted 2001-04-26 01:21 PM


Suthern, thank you so much for that.

Thank you all for leaving such kind thoughts and for taking the time to read this.  I indeed wrote it for the one who is special in my life.  He has a special way of touching my life, and I only wanted in someway to show him how much he means to me.
Thanks to all and a big hug to you all.  
Peace
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

sigheyes
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33 posted 2001-04-27 10:47 PM


This was so lovely, I just am learning about this library thing.  I hope you don't mind my answering to this again so I can put it there.  Thank you.  It truly is a beautiful reading.
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34 posted 2001-04-27 10:50 PM


Very much the way it should be...and is...for you!

Brava!

Gentle Spirit
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35 posted 2001-04-27 11:01 PM


sigheyes, a poem, twice read is always a compliment to any poet.   Thank you.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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36 posted 2001-04-27 11:03 PM


Sunshine, your words touch me deeply.  This is the way it should always be in love...I am grateful that it has come to me now.  Hugs sweet one!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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37 posted 2001-04-28 10:23 AM


To everyone, you have touched my heart deeply with your responses to this poem.  
I can never thank you all enough for your kind words and sentiments.  Hugs to all and Bless you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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