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juanrodriguez
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since 2001-04-17
Posts 66
ontario canada

0 posted 2001-04-23 02:30 PM


when ur heart dies
u dont seem to find replies
when ur heart turns cold
u cant find tears in ur eyes
when love brakes ur heart
ur soul becomes lonely
and your feelings
become hate
ur firends might tell u wait
for the right one
but where is the time?
where is my patience?
where is my love at all
its just a wait with no recall
and a pit where all my feelings fall


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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2001-04-23 06:21 PM


Juan....Patience. Thanks for sharing. Bob
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