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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-04-23 10:08 AM


Daisies in the Grass
Virginia Salter

little girl
sitting in the grass
blades tickling her thighs and calves
as she makes a daisy chain
for her mommy
and herself

the sunshine
warms her curls
as she carefully thumbnail slices
each stem
poking the next one in and pulling it through

beautiful, tiny white daisies
polka-dotting the playground
sparkling in the sun
waiting there
to become ankle bracelets
necklaces

spring and summertime
dressings
that speak of love
tenderness
joyful “in-the-park” play
skipping, running
dancing in gentle breezes

little-girl-hood
memories

©April 15, 2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2001-04-23 10:18 AM


And beautiful little girlhood memories they are. This is delightful Virginia!
Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2001-04-23 11:05 AM


VAS,
A delightful read.

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...
3 posted 2001-04-23 11:10 AM


wonderful memories...*s*
Tessa
Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 67
Ohio
4 posted 2001-04-23 12:41 PM


The images in this are stunning.  I could see it easily.  Nice work!
Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25
Posts 632
California, USA
5 posted 2001-04-23 02:53 PM


Very nice images painted here.  Took me back to my childhood where I was fascinated with daisies, buttercups, dandelions and even razor grass.*S*
Thank you.

Mike

Coco
Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48

6 posted 2001-04-28 02:11 AM


VAS, your poem is sooooooooooo sweet it's adorable PoetFriend and ya wanna know something else I still do those daisy chain braclets I just love em to death...

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
7 posted 2001-04-28 02:14 AM


Doesn't seem too long ago, that I sat and made these bracelets.  Only they were with dandelions.  We didn't have daisys.  Nice poem.  Joyce
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