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KokoStewartKoomoa
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0 posted 2001-04-23 03:27 AM




three million light years away
far above,
in another galaxy

Andromeda stars.
a whirling waltz
in cobalt blue


far below,
on the earth
autumn leaves dance in the wind.

{Abstract Renka}


© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-04-23 04:03 AM


Beautiful contrast! Makes a poet's thoughts wander through the beauty of both. I love that format and you've written a good delivery!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-04-23 05:49 AM


Koko I enjoyed this very much...James
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3 posted 2001-04-23 07:31 AM


KoKo~
Delightful visuals jump to mind with this lovely write.
Nicely done, poet.
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-04-23 09:42 AM


Koko - got your poet's brush out in full colors and the image was fabulous!
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5 posted 2001-04-23 10:50 AM


ooooh it's breathtaking and full of imagery!  
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6 posted 2001-04-24 11:07 AM


I LOVE THIS...a keeper....


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



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