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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2001-04-22 10:06 PM

Got Your Message

Got your message
something happened
head to toe
full body, soul

can’t explain it
don’t need to know
can’t go back now
against the flow

everything’s elevated
to a different plane
yet in my experience
it has no name

haven’t a clue
how this came from you
but a bit of me
is now all new



Krawdad  4.22.01

Krawdad
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Tessa
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 67
Ohio

1 posted 2001-04-22 10:08 PM

There are times that something does change us completely. At least, that's what I felt from this. I loved it. Very well written.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-04-22 10:15 PM

haven’t a clue
how this came from you
but a bit of me
is now all new

a great feeling when that happens isn't it *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-04-22 10:28 PM

Have been exactly, word for word...in this place. Very well translated from feeling to words.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-04-24 05:56 PM

A great feeling, isn't it? Yes, wonderfully expressed!

sp

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2001-04-24 06:37 PM

Beautiful.

I say never question if you can..but we will always.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-04-24 06:42 PM

How wonderful to be new. Joyce

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-04-24 09:04 PM

Very well done, my friend.

jwesley

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

8 posted 2001-04-25 12:25 PM

e........this is one of the sweetest poems i have read..........just love it.....h

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

NIAI
Member

since 2001-03-29

Posts 52

9 posted 2001-04-25 12:16 PM

I felt inspiritation from this. As poets, inspiritation is a welcomed gift. Thank You for the gift.

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

10 posted 2001-04-25 12:21 PM

awwwwww you make me tingle ...I got the message

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

11 posted 2001-04-25 12:52 PM

Some events can leave us so that we do not remain the same, it sounds like this time, for you, it was a good leaving. Great description of how it's effected you.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

12 posted 2001-04-29 06:28 PM

Thank you all for reading and responding.  I'm fascinated by what a poem becomes to a reader and it is your responses that make this place so interesting!  I appreciate them all.
"The message" was totally unexpected, marvelously serendipitous and utterly rare!  It was a once in a lifetime experience, I think, and I realized that the instant it occurred.
Only one of you could possibly know what the message really was and yet so many found a connection to the experience.  I wonder how many messages can do that.
But alas, the message seems to have become as ephemeral as it was marvelous.

Krawdad
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