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Forget Me Not

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Denise
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Forget me not when winter comes again
As crystal flakes float gently through the air;  
Remember me when daisies fill the glen,
When hyacinth is blooming everywhere;
Along the ocean side in reverie
Let waves of peacefulness drown sorest grief;
Recall from time to time a memory
A cherished moment shared, however brief;
Again when autumn leaves the warmth behind
And sorrow’s season comes to spend some time
Take comfort in those treasures in your mind
And sing again to springtime’s carefree rhyme.

Forget me not and I will not depart;
You'll find me dancing still within your heart.

  
© Copyright 2001 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 04-22-2001 08:56 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh,Denise~
So good to see your beautiful verse~

We'd never forget you
or the lovely smiles you leave everywhere you go.

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~



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2 posted 04-22-2001 09:11 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

....and dance there you do, Denise...it's SO good to see you again...
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3 posted 04-22-2001 09:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Marge and Balladeer, for reading and for you lovely replies. It's always nice to see you too!  
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4 posted 04-23-2001 06:49 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

You make me want to go out and enjoy the spring time flowers blooming everywhere.
Enjoyed very much!
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5 posted 04-23-2001 07:02 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

what a gift. . . always wonderful to see these from you. . .



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This is a rare and beautiful poem.  Joyce
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7 posted 04-23-2001 07:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you inot2B, Sven and Joyce, for reading and for your lovely replies. You make writing worth the effort (they don't come easily to me). Thanks again!
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8 posted 04-23-2001 08:32 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Denise--I'm always so glad to see your name becaue your poetry is always a treat to read...this one was wonderful.  
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Denise~ this made me think of and miss my Aunt Sue....beautifully done!    SEA
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Now who could forget you and one of your
cadence kissed sonnets...
they leave a lasting impression  
just perfect and beautiful Denise...
and yes... to echo the others...
so lovely to see a poem from you.  

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

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11 posted 04-24-2001 08:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Martie - Thank you for your sweet reply!  

SEA - I wrote this with a couple of folks in mind, too, that I dearly miss. (((HUGS)))

Janet - Thanks so much for your lovely words!  

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12 posted 05-17-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This poem has a sweet flowing ambience...James
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I was glad this was brought up again, I love it, it has a rich feel to it, and flows wonderfully, Denise, how do you do it!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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14 posted 05-17-2001 06:28 PM       View Profile for Tough_Cookie   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Tough_Cookie

Forget Me Not!
I like this so much I'd like your permission to send it to a friend.
May I?
Denise
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15 posted 05-17-2001 07:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, James, Kathleen and Tough Cookie for reading and for your lovely comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Yes, you may forward this to your friend Tough Cookie. I'd be honored. You could use the E-Card icon at the top right if you want to send it as a card. Also, welcome to Passions! I'm sure you will love it here!

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 05-17-2001).]

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very comforting  words, Denise *s
thank you for sharing

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


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17 posted 05-17-2001 07:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Maureen! So glad you enjoyed it!
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Denise
I am a new memeber here and i just wanted to thank- you for writing that lovly poem it really reminded me of my grandmother who justed passed on last month she loved the spring time and she loved flowers so your poem really made me think of her
thanks  
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You're welcome, Heavens Angel, I'm glad it reminded you of your grandmother. I'm sorry for your loss (((HUGS))) Welcome to Passions. I know you'll love it here! Check your email for a special gift!
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Denise
Such a beautiful picture you have painted from your palette of words.....wonderful!!
Take care......Sue

Suetang

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Denise,
I'm so glad I popped in here this evening to find this beautifully written piece.  My visits seem to be few and far between. But hopefully that will change soon.  This is a very lovely poem.  Thank you for sharing it with us.  
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wonderfully poetry...  enjoyed muchly.
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23 posted 05-19-2001 07:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Sue, Eloise (how ya been, girl?!) and Mike, for reading and for your lovely replies!
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OK. Densie.... I will not forget u ..lolo
Always remember..

I love to nice poetry.

 
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